Friday, August 3, 2012

Blog Flash 2012: Day 1

This is the first entry out of the thirty I'm attempting. It is part of a series of thirty entries so I hope you'll read each daily post to find out what happens in the end.
Thank you for reading!

1. Thinking

He ground his teeth as she left him in the parlour.
She wanted him to think about it, did she? She wanted to wring out all the pros and cons of his offer like a business proposal, not a personal one?
Weeks had passed and still, patient as he’d promised to be, he’d not urged her in a single way. But, he thought now, maybe that was proving to be his mistake; allowing her all this time.
And hell, there’d been enough thinking; she’d had enough to last for a lifetime.
And he had enough love to last hers too.


100 words

@Afsaneh_Dreams

5 comments:

  1. Enough with the thinking, already!! She better figure it out before I snap him up!! :)

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  2. Oooh, she must tell him! Is it yes or no?

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  3. You'll have to wait and see and read, Lisa!
    If he continues to be so sweet then you'll have to fight me for him, Ruth ;)

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  4. I *heart* love stories.
    *excited*!!
    This is all for now. ;)

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  5. I love the way you begin this. I'm ready for the man to get to it! Bring on the romance. :)

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