Monday, August 6, 2012

Blog Flash 2012: Day 5

This is the fifth entry out of the thirty I'm attempting. It is part of a series of thirty entries so I hope you'll read each daily post to find out what happens in the end.
Thank you for reading!

5. Frustrated

 “Will she reject me like she would a bloody stable boy? Has she set out to avoid me now?”
“I wouldn't know,” the butler had stolidly replied.
“Then find out!”
Upon returning, “She looks to rest after the long day.”
He understood it could’ve been true but he was frustrated after being embarrassingly disallowed. So, he remained sitting in the waiting room for a further half-hour.
“May I just say that your presence will only slander her reputation?”
Was it because the wiry old man made sense or was he tired of noting the rosewood table when he finally left?

100 words



  1. Thank you so much for taking part Afsaneh! I'm so pleased you were able to jump on board!

  2. Loved the frustration present, really strong character

  3. Interesting characters.

  4. Glad to do it, Terri.
    At the moment, he's more livid than interesting, I would say!


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