Visual Dare details are on the lovely Angela's blog, here.
You should join in - just use the image prompt for a little flash fiction or work-in-progress inspiration!
Image Prompt
My Entry
Two little faces pressed into glass, long yearning breaths
clouding the windowed world.
On the table inside was a basket of village berries, a plate
of biscuits and in the middle, a cake holding a candle.
The mother lit the wick. There was orange and yellow.
And a little blue, a shaken sliver.
The daughter’s eager gaze fell on the flame.
The girl outside puckered her lips. Her eyelids dropped and
for a moment, just one sparkling moment, there was a dream.
Extinguished.
The girl outside leaned on her brother’s shoulder. “Thank
you.”
He held her closer. “Happy birthday, sister.”
100 words
@Afsaneh_Dreams
Gorgeous piece, really beings them alive - and intriguing :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done - sparse yet fitting imagery, and mysterious too! So much more I'd like to know about the interior tableau, as well as the two looking in. Well done - and thanks for participating!
ReplyDeleteA moment from 'The Little Match Girl' came to mind...so beautiful that they appreciated the moment together!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is so lovely! I've read it three times and it's such a terrific concept and beautifully told!! <3
ReplyDeleteA beautiful concept and story. Can feel the yearning and the also the joy that the brother's thought has brought to his sister. Lovely!
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